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:iconamoretti-amaranthine:
Alright, so this is my first critique. :)

I love the black and white color scheme. I think that speaks volumes but not in an obvious way. The fact that it's so black and white makes me look at every print in this photo, and calls special attention to the music notes in the bowl. I love how the print is also so big that it doesn't detract from the music notes. It draws the viewer into them.

One thing I would suggest is not having the reflection on the bowl of the flowery print. I think that kind of takes away from the overall effect, but you'd have to be looking at the image for a long time to even notice it. I don't see that as a big issue.

My favorite part of this deviation, however, is that you took a concept (a totally original one, by the way) and ran with it. I've never seen--nor thought of--doing something like this. It's very refreshing to see something new! Great stuff!
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:iconentengruetze:
"Souldfood" by *xXxLEARNTOFLYxXx:

I'm writing this critique now, until I'm listening to great and awesome music. I think that's the reason, why I noticed inside of my head, that I have to write you some of my impressions about that picture.

I really like your concept behind it and it's a very original idea, that you've got there! A glass of milk, that's a bit crazy. But I kinda like crazy things and crazy ideas. Even when I think, you choose the milk for the better contrast. (:

I love everything about that picture, teh fact, that it's black and white, the fact, that there are music notes in your glass or better bottle.

Even the table fits perfect!

I melting away. =)
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:iconxxxlearntoflyxxx:
:D
thank you:aww:

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:iconswiii:
das kool. ;D

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:iconxxxlearntoflyxxx:
Danke:w00t:

auch wenn mich die ganze zeit stört das ich zu faul war die Noten nochmal ordentlicher zu schneiden:yum:

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…we use the negatives to develop.”

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:icongabbyd70:
really cool photo and idea! Nice work :D
:iconxxxlearntoflyxxx:
cheers:D

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:icon50calwolf:
very creative :D

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:iconlemrac:
Interesting concept dear! I love it. The black and white really does give a good impact on the photo! :clap:

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:icondruideye:
Amazing concept, well done.

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I love the concept & the visual is well-executed. Great job!

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Apr 25, 2009, 12:25:01 PM

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